TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 AW OVA 02 [partially TLed and TLCed to an extent][Timed]
Workraw: [RAW] Accel World  Ginyoku no Kakusei Episode 2 [640x360][AVC][AAC]


2
Tough armor!
And tough!
{I'd combine the phrasing with last line}

3
Olive drab, the color of the military!

4
I won't let a rubbish blue lad like you to defeat me!
I won't let a rubbish blue lad put a scratch on me!
{damage =/= defeating someone}

5
Try saying that again once I have wiped the floor with your face! {Say that to my face!} {00:23 TLC}
Try saying that again in Leoniz' territory!
{I haven't seen AW, but apparently that's the blue guy's territory}

10
If you want to play war with us, ??? {00:51}
If you like to play war, just go play airsoft war in real life.
{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Airsoft}

17
The guy on the left is mine.{I'll take care of the guy.} {???} {1:24 TLC}
{no problem with this line. context and video shows she's onto the left guy}

22
Today's results from the Legion Battle was Seven to Five.
{why capitals?}

25
Agreed, but for her to be physically here is out of the question.
Agreed, but it seems that she can't come over here as always.
{the context flows just a bit differently.}

26
It can't be helped, it's a long way from here to Shibuya.
It can't be helped, it's a long way to here from Shibuya.
{oh hey, a generitranslation. Also, the grammar is reversed in this case}

31
In the real world, you wouldn't last 30 minutes after eating my Mom's lasgna!
In the real world, you wouldn't last 30 minutes after eating my Mom's lasagna!

38
Ugh, yea.
Uh, yeah.
{I don't like writing yea without the h. Also, he doesn't see the bad thing of it yet, so it can't be ugh}

46
I kinda... might... have read something along those lines... { kDid I read it before...?}
{all fine as it is now}

47
You {\i1}definitely{\i0} did! {I bet you didn't.}
I bet you just ignored it!
{suruu = "through" = pass it ==> ignored}

48-49-50
change the phrasing: {matching the timing of the lines}
Whenever you get a unpleasant notice, you pretend you didn't read them,
eventually forgetting them in the end.
That happened quite often.

53
It sounds exactly like something you would do. {If it's you, then it sounds just about right.}
You're usually doing that, Haru.
{because I changed context in the first lines, this one needs fixing too. Kekkou aru "happens often". "usually}

57
Why so? {What's so bad about what?}
How so? 
{why so is internet slang, don't know if it's fitting for fansub purposes}

58
The program begins every Saturday from five to night.
The program runs on every Saturday from afternoon till late in the evening.
{gogo is afternoon, get your facts straight man. That's lv5 vocab right there.}

59
Also, the program will take your neuro linker off line until it's complete {will be held in a seperate  ???,} {5:11 TLC}
Also, the program will disable your Neuro-Linker,
{so long}

68
You either have to meet the minimum by the time the re-examination takes place,
{lit. improve your score at the re-examination in two weeks}
{this is also the case at 72, but because the context shows better with that minimum, I'm keeping this just as a sidenote}


69
or give up and reluctantly enter the program.
or give up and meekly follow the program.
{the context here is that he gives in and follows the program without complaining {which is the opposite of reluctant}

75
Say Haru, how about, you got tricked and ended up giving up all the junk food to me, {getting tricked upon and leaving it all to me}
Say Haru, how about pretending you got tricked and ended up giving all the junk food to me,
76
for the entire week and next week as well?
for a week, starting next week?
{the problem was majorly the latter line. It's just a week, but starting next week.}

78
Then think of it as a tragedy where a dog raided your food supplies. {bit you.}
Well then, how about you've been betrayed instead?
{it's an idiom}

84
I, Chiyuri-san, who has tried every and all kinds of diet, will turn Haru and Silver Crow into
I, Chiyuri-san, who has tried every and all kinds of diets, will turn Haru and Silver Crow
85
an astonishing slim figures! {6:36 TLC}
into astonishing slim figures! 
{wordwrapped a bit differently. no problem with this part of the line}

86
Usually the best method for fitness, is to start off with easy exercises, {6:44 TLC}
Normally one would gradually build up the pace with exercising,

88
so I will be pushing you to your limits from the get go. {won't go easy on you!}
so I will be pushing you to your limits from the get-go. {won't go easy on you!}

97
Now then, the first round. Begin! {7:24 TLC}
Now then, for the first lap. Begin!
{oufuku: return trip literally. So it's 100m (50m pool x 2)}

99
Nothing, I realized it has grown a bit.
Nothing, I realized they have grown a bit.
{boings are plural}

100
There's a difference between the last I went to a bath with you and now.
Compared to last time I went to a bath with you.
{shorter please}

103
I guess it's just an optical illusion.
{me no sakkaku ka}

106
if you guys start loosing, the game will be back to it's former savage state and it'd be bad for players like us. {???, it'd be bad on our side.} {7:33 TLC}
if your win rate drops, Suginami will revert into a melee area like before, causing a great inconvenience for us.
{what happened}

107
So make sure he continues to work his ass off, alright? {TLC}
{I think this is fine. shigoku = to work someone hard == train}

{sign after 107}
No snacking!

124
The hot-springs that I know off is known for it's weight loss properties. {affecting one's weight.}{9:46 TLC}
The hot springs that I know of is known for its positive effect on one's physical condition.
{lit. works in improving one's physical condition.}

125
126 {these two lines are only 1 sentences
This weekend, after the usual Legion Battle,
how about an diet camp at that place? 

127
You mean there, Fuuko?
You mean {\i1}there{\i0}, Fuuko?

130
By the way, it's a unisex hot spring. {Including making out.} {TLC}
By the way, it's a mixed bath.
{I think people are more used to the wording mixed}

138
This is unisex, no need to hold back. {TLC}
{don't know why this is TLC labeled. also, again, maybe mixed is a better word}

142
Why do we have to bathe under our avatar forms?
Why do we have to bathe in our avatar forms?

154
Instructor! That's not it at all! {you're going off topic here!} {TLC}
{this current phrasing is fine as is.}
158
so I can sneer at you! {something something} {TLC 11:10}
{idem}

159
The darkness of working your ass off!
The hardships of the Crow!
{there's this kurou (crow) no kurou (hardship) pun in here}

161
It's said that this hot springs can recharge your status bar.
These hot springs are known for its effective status ailment recovery.
{this are elementary TL mistakes man}

163
When you ressurect after dieing in the game, you are still affected by a couple of adverse effects. {Something something, even if you resurrect from death, something about stasus bar} {11:40 TLC}
When you resurrect after dying in-game, you're still affected by some status ailments.

164
The best way to counter these effects is to buy medicine from an item shop.
However, the common way to remove these ailments is to buy tinctures from an item shop.
{yeah for game terms}

165
Coming here has the same effect as the medicine.
Coming here has the same effect as such tinctures.
{to fix consistency}

170
For your information, the opposite sex is separated from each other in the real world,
For your information, men and women are separated from each other in the real world,
{you can't seperate one sex}

178
If that was the case, I should have joined in, and cleared it in real life. {12:27 TLC}
If that's the case, I'd love to get permission to leave the campus and come here in real life. 
{this is AW related so my change might be bullshit. seems she needs permission for something}

182
from now 'till night fall, we will be on a fast. {12:38 TLC}
from now until the end of tomorrow, we will be on a fast. 
{this is formal speech}

184
We're going to keep this regime up for the rest of the days we are here for. {12:48 TLC}
Make use of this time to prepare for tomorrow. 

192
193 {aw stuff again}
I'll leave my stuff in your care. Please completely format the memory banks in my Linker
and my home server without taking any peak at it.
{I hope this makes more sense, but I don't know what the context of AW is}

194
It's only a week, so get a grip.
Come on, you only have to endure one more week.

203
Yep, he was cool and popular back in the days.
Yep, he was secretly cool and popular back in the days.

204
Then we will have to understand how he became fat.
Then, how did he actually become fat?

213
Is this one of those Shoki ones? {TLC 14:56}
Is this an early version?

243
{sign} 
We're going to bed first.


244
{sign}
Open-air Bath
Opening times
18:00 - 20:30 Women's
20:30 - 23:00 Men's
Note the switch.
{a bit liberalized}

266
If you truely want to be slimmer, I will not get in your way. { counter act.}
If you say you want to become slimmer, I will not get in your way. 

271
A child's redokai or midoseranai feelings turn into power. {19:06}
Feeling of inferiority and unfulfilled feelings from childhood will be your power.

272
However, when that emotion is broken,
However, when those emotions are dissolved,

273
[nothing]
or alternatively, when you come to terms with them...
{Is this AW story related?}

274
when we reach adulthood, perhaps we no longer need to accelerate?
If we reach adulthood by then, perhaps we no longer need to accelerate?

277
In reality this is what I am. Dirty minded and selfish.
In reality, I'm but a greedy and selfish girl. 
{don't take kitanai to literal here. Look in the dictionary.}

278
You probably hate me now, don't you? {You probably don't want any buisness with me anymore, am I wrong?} {THIS LINE IS SCREWED UP. CHROUYA TELL ME (HIPSTER) WHAT TO DO}
Disgusting, don't you think? {You're probably disgusted by me.}
{or surprised, but with negative connotation}

280
The fact that my wings sufaced is solely because of that.
The fact that my wings surfaced is solely because of that.

296
And so, I lost my concious just like that.
And so, I lost my consciousness just like that.

297 298 299
I was then forced to do the Iwatari of Judo,
and was under a diet that was out of this world,
All of that contributed into my long slumber for the entire week.
{this can be rewritten to one single sentence} ==>
I was bedridden for a whole week due to extensive exposure to hot water and reckless dieting.